1

The word Lisa is etched into a tree

and I feel ill.

 

2

If I had a straw I would breathe

some life into my milk.

 

3

She says hello, he ignores me

and no one is drinking chocolate milk.

 

4

It’s too sweet

like melted soap.

 

5

Another boy drinking my brand.

4° of refrigeration.

 

6

The chocolate milk doesn’t know

that I’m preoccupied 

with listening to blackbirds.

 

He’s got plain milk and a tennis ball.

It could be an apple.

 

8

My chocolate milk and I did not guess that

girl would finish her tea and have a limp. 

 

9

This milk is unnatural.

The corners don’t fit my hand.

 

10

My chocolate milk has faded since I bought it.

 

11

All I want is someone to agree with me

that it’s cold, so I can throw my milk

away.

 

12

I can look at my chocolate milk on the 

internet.

 

13

If I drank my chocolate milk and no one 

cared, did I really want it in the first

place?

 

 

Write a poem in the style of my poem 13 Ways To Drink Chocolate Milk.
It is a mix of observations about the food you are consuming and what
is going on around you in the public place where you are consuming it.

Justin Heazlewood

#30in30 writing prompt

Poetry is abstract.
It speaks to the silver lining of the soul.
It’s prose with line breaks.
Lyrics in need of a mandolin.
A stranger’s dream packed into a carob square.