There’s A World Where My Head Ought Be
By Suren Jayemanne
Published 3 August 2025
One day it hit me,
I’ll never see my face.
A simple truth, in which, once understood
such freedom I found.
Of course, I’ll see it reflected,
perhaps in a mirror
or maybe a pond.
A handsome sight, sure
but that’s not my face
just a play of light.
I see my face
reflected in the back window
of a Kia Sportage
because at the time
I believe it to be empty.
On closer inspection
a lady sits inside.
She rolls down her window
“Are you right?” she asks.
“Just checking I have a face”
I reply.
She smiles
and in seeing her face
I feel reassured,
as if it reflects my own
With recognition, I acknowledge
her growing smile
her two eyes, two ears
her two noses.
“Wait, what?”
I blurt out.“What’s wrong”
I gesture first to one then the second.
“Oh that” she begins
“Once I smelt a rose so beautiful”.
She continued
“I recognised in it a beauty like no other
and upon thanking it,
the rose granted me a wish
and all I could think to wish for
was one more nose,
so when next I meet a similar rose
I can enjoy its scent
twice the same”.
The light turns green
And off she drives.
All of a sudden
I forget my face,
now atop my shoulders
where a face should be,
is an entire world
I’d like to enjoy,
starting with a scented rose.
Nobody likes being stuck in their head. I like to be in my foot. Is it freedom or a whole new prison? Spend some time in your foot and see what you write.
Suren Jayemanne
#30in30 writing prompt
There’s the world that IS and the world that is merely ideas in our heads.
We spend life in the latter with poetry a neat bridge back to the former.
Suren Jayemanne
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