Dad's Garden

The blossom appears
In the heavenly springtime
The daisy is pink

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This poem was Highly Commended (Primary) for Poetry Object 2016

Judge's Notes:
"This is an apparently simple poem, only three lines, but it does so much within its economical form. It is, of course, that perfect Japanese form, the haiku, and in this case has been written using the usual 5-7-5 syllable count. The key to a great haiku is its movement. This terrific little poem flows lightly from one object to seasonal scene then to another specific object. This is that simplicity that offers revelation. It opens up the poem to other ways of thinking (what does ‘pink’ mean for any of us?) as well as grounding the poem in colour. And in this poem it’s quick and effective. The idea of pinkness adds a touch of deliciousness to the whole effect."
~ Jill Jones, Judge, Poetry Object 2016