Inverted Weather
By Toby Fitch, Vacant Dragon à la Subverted Lips
Published 27 June 2024
A car in front of you jumps out of the road like an orca and lands on its back
Kisses a spider’s web in the dried-out garden bed beside the train track
While every house with a dog nearby implodes at sunset
And dark creeps streets like dew-fueled Devil’s Ivy
How many kids are pissing right now on carpets beneath The Last of Us?
Can the succulents hear the hum of I See a Darkness as hair dye bleeds down a drain?
Roses unfurl, the suburbs glower, 747s intersect on runways
A back-lane stone curlew screaming—recreate it with the Red Panda particle pedal (rare)
If a pride of Fuzzfaces can’t emulate a wipeout then some tropical storm will
Strum a tsunami’s tongue, a shrewd transistor feeder licking its hummingbird brain
And crashing Wall St and its concrete palms into smithereens
Mashed calculator on the sidewalk, shadows of piggies flooding the market
With gulls criss-crossing reflections a lightning conductor pierces another stormfront
Fierce rain grenade on green shoots an extension of the object image
Objectively imagined, you see in night-green vision while raining shots of grenadine
Your drone technology reflecting gull markers on conductors under high-voltage
Flying pigs, whose mishmash of calcified shadows haunt Mardi Gras
Concrete lies, petrified in palmers pumping streets into weeping rubble
And brains, lick the tsunami back with their shrewd, resistant tongues humming
Their faces, a spiral arrangement thundering low and rich since the autumn of 1966
So you curl back into red bricks, pan the lane, make yourself as rare and particulate as a stone
You’re on another plane, in a satellite city, under a fashionable shower rose
Which sucks out the darkness from hair—drains hear the hum, succulents die
A dry spell, a slow script, a farfetched plot, a balding carpet, an inky undercurrent of despair
Devilled likenesses creep into view and night dew drips from the sky as from an IV
Sun collapses on houses of grave and immortal tension—dog-toothed nothings
As trains of spiders lie down in garden beds, kissing the webbed air goodnight
In unihemispheric sleep, one eye open for headline, jumpstart, carcass or psychopomp
Footnote: this poem was created using the Dietary Restrictions constraint, in which the two authors decided that each line must contain an animal or plant, a human-made object, a location, plus some kind of apocalyptic weather. It was partly inspired by the sestina ‘Crone Rhapsody’ by John Ashbery and Kenneth Koch, whose every line contains the name of a flower, a tree, a game, and a famous elderly lady, as well as the word ‘bathtub’, while all of the end-words are pieces of office furniture. As ‘Inverted Weather’ unfolded, it took on the shape of a double sonnet in which all 14 lines of the second half of the poem reflect on their counterpart lines from the first half in inverse order.